Sunday, August 15, 2010

HER STORY!!

She tried to speak, but her lips wont move
She tried to reach but her hands wouldnt move
She tried everything but nothing seemed to work
Where do I go, Who do I call she asked????
She tried to walk, but her knees caved in............
She crawled, she saw the light but it was only a bleak
Her eyes were blurred, her lips chapped.............
She cld taste the blood, she felt the dust............
Yet alone on the lonely path, she made up her mind to move
The pain was excruciating, her will was daunted.............
She wanted to give up, Who cared anyways............
Maybe sumone wld help, seeing her helpless
Maybe not, whats the guarantee she aint a street whore
Probably trying to steal and got beat up..........
She flinched in pain, the wind was fierce ................
The streets were lonely and the night cld not av been darker
As she crawled, she heard voices and she lay still
The wind tossed her hair, the voices were closer.....
Footsteps!!! sounded like drunks and dey moved past her
She laid lifeless on the ground, as they walked on
She moved and they stopped, the noise???
She caught her breath, and cld hear them.............
Dear lord was all she cld say and she felt the foot......
The foot tapped her and then turned her over..........
There in the dark, she recognized the voice
She had no strength to move and surrendered to death
A hand grabbed on her hair and dragged her up
These hoodlums were thirsty and hungry for her
Drunk and sweating of Alchohol.....................
All she cld mutter was Lord let this night END!!
Then.................
A bark echoed, den a flash light....It was HIM
As he walked, the keys and links on his belt clanked
He walked towards them and as he approached the scene
They ran, and she slumped back on the ground...........
He let loose his dog as it chased after them...............
He ran towards her and gathered her to him.........
He shook her, but she felt numb, Miss he said
She thot she heard him, She opened her eyes but...........
She saw nothing, the stars in the skies seemed like Dots
She saw darkness and den it became real BLACK OUT!!!

10 comments:

Miss Euphoria Jade Oyatz said...

hmmm.... very dark...a bit unlike you hun, what gives?

Teejay said...

Diff sides to me hun lol

Myne said...

Well written, I was there with her. Glad someone came by to save her.

Teejay said...

Yay Myne thanks for stopping by, good i caught u here wanted to introduce u to my sis Miss Euphoria, in my opinion a gifted writer and Jade meet one of my inspirations Myne who is the author of *A heart to mend* yall shld hook up on blogsville,......

Seun B said...

The lord always sends an helper.
Well written.

gretel said...

Beautiful very beautiful,me likey,me miss you.
Ur sister????Wowwwww

musco said...

Well written!

1st time here, shld be here more often.really cool blog!

Teejay said...

Awwh I am so overwhelmed, thanks guys u guys inspire and encourage me, Seun B thanks Mama, Gretel hunny miss u too and yup my adopted lil sisi lol. Musco thank u and welcome hope I keep u interested.....
God bless u guys

Unknown said...

i like

Teejay said...

Thanks Tisha,